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*CaraFaye Sep 25, 2009, 11:38:42 AM
The contrasts are very intensive and black & white is a very good choice. In my mind, the image section is perfect.
You have to look straight into her soul - through that wonderful eyes - what is important for a good portrait, in my opinion.
Furthermore, it is great how she holds her hand and plays with her hair.
Additionally, for me, the styling and makeup is really special and I like it very much!
Never the less, her face is a little bit too light without some shape, but this does not harm to that fascinating portrait.
The picture is one of my favorites since some days
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@dammitMEL Apr 13, 2009, 8:53:59 PM
The composition on this is good, but I'm not a fan of the makeup or the post processing technique. When you do your makeup and plan on increasing the saturation this much , I wouldn't use a splotch of black on the outer corners of your eyes. Maybe practice contouring your entire face so it looks a bit more natural and soft after the post processing?

Your lips also seem to blend into your face, but I feel like a less harsh amount of post processing would be able to soften this effect. Since you are a striking model, show it off!
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~oosajaoo Apr 11, 2009, 6:15:13 AM
awwwww so gorgeous!!!
i like ur pix like hell =)
but i wanna ask u Q :$ how do u make ur pix??
nd if u use photoshop,,what photoshop do u use?
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=jocosity Apr 11, 2009, 6:25:04 AM
hell thanks ^^ :heart: :thanks:

I use Photoshop CS and Adobe Lightroom

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~connielux Apr 11, 2009, 8:23:38 AM
Beautiful pic! I love the expression... congratulations! :w00t:

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~lory-c Apr 11, 2009, 9:04:32 AM
Awesome :wow: :heart:

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*h-ellosunshine Apr 11, 2009, 10:27:25 AM
this is beautiful.
i love the angle and contrast :)

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=Rykardo Apr 11, 2009, 10:57:12 AM
Beautiful :)

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